I would like some feedback on this part of my build. ( :

So ye,some of this part isn’t visible in a screen cuz of the fog,so the player only sees whats infront of him and ye ik it’s rlly bright xD.Prolly have to put a warning on the build lol (eyecancer incoming).
The entrance to the part of the build:


Some of the things in the Room:

and the end:

I hope I’ill get some good feedback,have a good day and thx in advance (:innocent:
I tried to make it less bright xD

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Final picture is very nice. Other pictures are incredibly bright and hard to see, but you addressed this. Epic!

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For the first 3 sets of images I would recommend kinda toning the neon down a bit really hard to see the models themselves. But for the last image looks really good.

I would just add more details to the walls for the last image to encompass everything together because the parts you have in there are good and detailed its just the walls make it look bland.

But other than that you got a solid build!

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It looks cool, but maybe tone down the brightness a bit on the first couple pictures.

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Yo thanks for taking the time to write such a long text with actual feedback,I often see people that don’t do it that well. :smile:

I don’t see anything… I recommend making the colors less bright. It hurts my eyes.

Thanks.

I’m blinded by the lights (If you get it you get it), but seriously looks pretty good, but try turning down the lights.

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Me: sings blinded by the lights
I really like the last pic though!

Nice job!

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Kk,I get it,everyone wants to actually see the build,I ill maybe make it less bright xD

Very good looking, although the first few are extremely bright, it looks pretty nice.

They look awesome! I think there’s too much light in the first pictures for me to really see and view the build, but the last picture came out awesome! Good job so far.

That looks so cool man!
But for the first 3 images I would tone it down a little on the neon, but other than that its looks pretty cool!

Your welcome, Let me know if you need any more help :slight_smile:

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Oh my goodness it’s bright, but very well done. :+1: :grinning:

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If u reach the not so bright end ur eyes will be happy!
It’s all part of my plan :stuck_out_tongue:

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I editet the post,with images where u can actually see the build xD. Would be nice to get Feedback from u,now where u can actually see it. (;

Epic! It looks great. Good job! :+1:
It looks a bit too bright but the last image shows it clearly.

The first part almost blinded me buddy! :grin: Depend on what you’re trying to make, maybe cool it down with the bright blue?

Well, it look nice but I think some darker colours are needed. Also you should probably use some textures that go along with the metal and neon to just give a fresher look.

The build does have,very dark parts,this is just one part of it