I would looove some Feedback on this part of my build

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#1

This is the third part of this build,after the Feedback and some extrawork imma call this build done! :smiley:
Part 1: I would like some feedback on this part of my build. ( :
Part 2: I would like some feedback on this part of my build!

So like for the other two I would love some improv-ideas! :innocent:
Entrance:

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What u see first after entering:
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The stairs:
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Upstairs:
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End:
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A better look at the beds:
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Hope I get some good feedback! ;D Wish y’all a nice dayyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!

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#2

Ok so the first three pictures right here:

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The black colour of how dark it is is so dark, I think this is a creepy place for players to visit

But I like the rest of the build its looks pretty good, good job brother

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#3

The player isn’t supposed to feel too comfy (:

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#4

The neon material makes it look too bright; I recommend using another material.

#5

I recommend smoothplastic or material that makes it look appealing