Link to item or Asset ID: Spikier Biker - Roblox
Issue or current text:
Near the end of the accessory description, it is missing a period. The original test is “You thought spiky biker was spiky? Be careful not to run over your bike with this helmet”
Recommendation or corrected text:
The grammatically correct text should be: “You thought spiky biker was spiky? Be careful not to run over your bike with this helmet.”
Link to item or Asset ID: 'R' Visor - Roblox
Issue or current text:
The description says you’ll get this hat if you redeem a Roblox Card in July, however it doesn’t specify the year. It should say July 2013 because right now it’s misleading and says that you’ll get in if you redeem a card in July, regardless of the year.
Here’s the current text: “If it wasn’t clear to everyone that you play ROBLOX before, it is now. Get this exclusive visor when you redeem a ROBLOX card from selected stores in July.”
Recommendation or corrected text:
Here’s the fixed text: “If it wasn’t clear to everyone that you play ROBLOX before, it is now. Get this exclusive visor when you redeem a ROBLOX card from selected stores in July 2013.”
Link to item or Asset ID: 12th Birthday Cake Hat - Roblox
Issue or current text:
The description text should be updated because it is no longer redeemable. Here’s the current text: “Happy 12th birthday, Roblox! Celebrate with a delicious cake for your head! This item is only redeemable with a special code for a limited time.”
Recommendation or corrected text:
Here’s the fixed text: “Happy 12th birthday, Roblox! Celebrate with a delicious cake for your head! This item was only redeemable with a special code for a limited time.”
Link to item or Asset ID: 1st Day of School Baseball Cap - Roblox
Issue or current text:
The description text has four periods when it should actually have three. An ellipsis is a set of three dots unless it’s used after a grammatically correct sentence. Since the c in celebrate isn’t capitalized in the following current text, it’s used incorrectly.
Here’s the current text: “The dreaded day is here… celebrate with this cap!” (The Devforum shortens a four dotted ellipsis into three dots, to see the actual original text you must go to the link provided above)
Recommendation or corrected text:
Here’s the fixed text:
“The dreaded day is here… celebrate with this cap!”
or
“The dreaded day is here. Celebrate with this cap!”
Link to item or Asset ID: Dominus Frigidus - Roblox
Issue or current text:
The end of the description is missing a period to end the sentence. Current text: “Aut vincere aut mori”
Recommendation or corrected text:
Fixed text: “Aut vincere aut mori.”
Link to item or Asset ID: Duke of the Federation - Roblox
Issue or current text:
The Duke of the Federation shares a description with all the other federation hats. For reference, you can see it here, here, and here. The problem with Duke of the Federation is the formatting of a few words is different, when it should be the same.
Here’s the current description text of Duke of the Federation: “The wars of re-unification are complete. The federation is whole once more. All of creation is yours.”
Here is the description text of the other federation hats: “The Wars of Reunification are complete. The Federation is whole once more. All of creation is yours.”
To keep them all the same, I think the description of the Duke of the Federation should be modified.
Recommendation or corrected text:
Here is the fixed text for Duke of the Federation’s description: “The Wars of Reunification are complete. The Federation is whole once more. All of creation is yours.”