I don’t know if this is the correct place to make this post, but I’ll send it nonetheless.
I am currently illustrating and making a visual novel on Roblox, and with that means I am also making all of the character designs. For more reference, you can click here to see my older posts on the game, as well as seeing the older character design.
I had a previous design with this particular character (in this case, the female protagonist), but I did not like how it had turned out, since the illustration had really wonky anatomy and coloring, as well as being bland. So, I decided to redraw her, of which it really improved a whole lot in my opinion.
Here is a comparison of the new sketch and the old one:
Images
The redesigned sprite was drawn on a smaller sized canvas, so it is lower resolution in the example image shown below.
Redesign:
Original:
The reason why the sprite isn’t colored is that I would like to receive feedback on the artwork before I begin the long process of coloring, like if the proportions are good, or if I should add anything else.
(NOTE: I also intend to give her bag some keychains, and to add earrings, I just forgot to draw those in before I exported the outlines)
That being said, thank you for reading my post, and I wish you a great day/ night.
